Thanks? About what? I do not understand
Thanks? About what? I do not understand
Actually,...
I_
Just_
Couldn't_
Understand_
Whahat_Elephant_said...
Even_though_I_tried_to_translate_from_English_ to _Vietnamese_ word_by_word. '________'
*This creature is in extremely bad mood right now.
Approach with the highest caution.*
And the old man fishing time @ goldfish
Every day the old man is out to sea fishing. One day he pulled the net into the sea as usual but do not pull nothing except small goldfish. See small fish flickering poor so he released it back into the sea. Strangely fish immediately spoke and thanked the old man said he would reward with a wish. Because he is not so greedy and bye a fish on. Listening to stories narrated to his wife, his wife immediately yelled:
- He was stupid! He did not see the home computer or copy it firewood? Why did he not ask for better than new ones also connected to the Internet, online games, chat or something.
The old man burned immediately back out to sea and fish experience recounted such stories. Fish said: "It is hard to do it, he just went home, his wish will come true."
The old man home, he found his wife sitting on the orchestra chat pentium IV computer. He then walked into the house and brought his wife:
- Now we use to do something core 2 that he has this pentium machine pick on what to do, he quickly changed it to protect my machine for two or four people do it.
The way the old man met his wife immediately and told goldfish so. Sad goldfish Alright but said he kept on, his wife will be satisfied. He has just arrived home, his wife said:
- I'm tired of this machine, I like the fashion is now a full laptop use, he let the fish told me so quickly up the laptop.
Sad old man steps into the sea, big waves overwhelmed, goldfish appear. The old man immediately after the words for fish, said his wife, angry fish, but also meet his conditions. Mu wife thought that this time will be fulfilled, but as he got home his wife cried midwife:
- What machines unleashing viruses, heavy, slow dragged, he just told it to change how fast my machine, using simple, light but did not get a virus.
The old man deeply saddened by his wife because of greed. He calls out to sea, the sea goldfish intense, black light water. When he recounted his wife's request for hearing, the pelagic fish fraud loss. Thui back home, he only saw his wife sitting Mu lounging before the Casio Pocket PC
Pretty interesting story. But goldfish are located in the home with the gravy! I like to eat a bowl.
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C6 not attending this evening you?
Lần sửa cuối bởi voimonster, ngày 18-02-2011 lúc 04:05 PM.
Note: There are a few adjustments in dairy topic English club.!
Please read in article # 1 !
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Lần sửa cuối bởi voimonster, ngày 18-02-2011 lúc 04:20 PM.
That article is?If you do not talk, I do not know
Lần sửa cuối bởi voimonster, ngày 18-02-2011 lúc 04:19 PM.
I very like saying and answering in English. In forum, i want to write new post and comment. But my English skill is not really good,so i need help from all of you. Can you correct all of my reply's mistake. Thank for you.
I think we should write the simple sentence, because we dont have many time to learn English at school, our grammar skill isn't very good. It is my idea.
We can talking together about our school, class,... in English, it make us better.
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Thank you for your comments. This is a good idea. Each week we will offer a topic related to school. Each member will write the contents on that topic. No need to write more. But is the important key issues. It will help not only learn English well. But also the Vietnamese-speaking skills in front of people and expression.
After a certain member made his speech. The remaining members will review and edit mistakes in grammar and vocabulary.
If you feel that the topic or the grammar or vocabulary, members can write up.
Here I would first topic raised.
Topics 1: Talk about a change of scene after her van became the principal teacher.
-Where there have been many changes in many aspects, especially the grassroots, material and infrastructure.
Next please ....:
Lần sửa cuối bởi voimonster, ngày 18-02-2011 lúc 04:19 PM.
Try to write in both languages as I do if you can't express your idea, don't use some ridiculous translation program to aid you.
@Voimonster: Your posts are suffering terrible terrible grammar mistakes and wrong vocabulary. I don't[can't] correct all of them (as I couldn't get what you tried to say), but will tell you some major ones.
@All: Do not "play" with English, try to learn it properly. Using and repeating simple tenses and sentences may be boring and slow, but it will benefit later.
This story seems like a translation of Vietnamese version by Google Translate '_____'.
If you really have done that, you should get rid of that habit, because if you rely on it too much, it'll be really bad for your English. Google translate may and may only good to use for translating simple sentences and guessing the meaning of article, it can't translate accurately with the current technology.
You should use "daily" instead of "dairy", if you really meant "happens day to day, regularly or repeatedly". The word "dairy" means talking of those products made from milk, related to milk.
Your post is quite good, though still has few mistakes. The first sentence, using "very" is incorrect, because even when "very" can be use as an adv., it can not be in that position (unnatural English), you should use another adv., like: really: "I really like saying and answering in English"; or should get rid of it.
The last one: the verb after "can" must be in infinitive form , so it must be "talk" instead of "talking". "It makes us better" or "It will make us better" should be correct.
- If you are not talking about your idea (or our idea - general idea), you should use "that" rather than "this".
- You're trying to use "not only - but also" structure, it's a good effort, however it's incorrect. the sentence's structure after both phrases "not only" and "but also" must be the same , Ex:
[Verb-form structure]
- It will help you not only to learn English well, but also to improve Vietnamese speaking skill....
- It will not only help you to learn English well, but also improve your Vietnamese speaking skill....
[Noun-form structure]
- It will help you not only learning English well, but also improving Vietnamese speaking skill....
- It will help you improve not only English skills , but also Vietnamese speaking skill....
The third underline one is in wrong word order. It should be:
- Here I would like to rise the first topic.
Or use some other ways to introduce a topic:
- I would like to start with the first topic. ("would like" is a polite way)
- I will bring out the first topic.
- I want to present the first topic.
...
Some correction for the topic 1 [according to what I understand]: Talk/discuss about [the change]/changes of scene/school after Mrs.Van became the (school's) principal/president.
For example, the school has been changed in many aspects, especially the facilities and infrastructures.
Well, it appears that Voimonster might also use Google translate to get the English version of his comment. That's not really good at all. Indeed :/.
After you finish writing your comment (it's better if u leave it for a while rather than start immediately), you should at least re-read it few times to see if there is any mistake, or do you really understand what you wrote? By doing that, you will remember your mistakes and learn better, and may even develop your correction skill, which is really helpful for your exam later on.
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